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  • @ 2025-12-12 20:23:00

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    the LZH and Potato War

    In the 2025 BCE,the Potato fought the LZH for ten years.

    The Potato soldiers are tired of war, one of them found a way to capture the LZH.They built a big golden potato.but there is a secret door on the potato.Some potato soldiers hided in it.

    One day,the Potato soldiers sailed away and pretended to fail.The LZH soldiers find a big golden potato.The king of LZH ordered the soldiers to pull the potato into the city.

    The LZH's soldiers celebrated their victory ,they sang and danced ,and made jokes about the stupid Potato.

    By midnight,the LZH soldiers went to bed and the Potato soldiers climb out out of the golden potato.They opened the main gate of LZH.In the end , the Potato won the war with a trick,and without any fight!

    • @ 2025-12-14 22:19:08

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      这篇短文是一则有趣的虚构历史故事,创意不错,但存在一些语法、用词和逻辑问题。以下是我的分析、评分和修改建议:


      一、语法与用词问题分析

      1. 时态混乱

        • 开头用“2025 BCE”是过去,但后面用了现在时(如 sailed away and pretended fail 应改为 pretended to fail 且整体为过去时)。
        • “make jokes” 应改为过去时 made jokes
        • “go bed” 应改为 went to bed
      2. 拼写与搭配错误

        • pretended failpretended to fail
        • oderordered
        • soiderssoldiers
        • stupiedstupid
        • go bedwent to bed
      3. 冠词与单复数问题

        • the Potato 作为国家/军队名,可以大写,但最好保持一致性(有时用 Potato soldiers,有时用 the Potato)。
        • a big golden potato 没问题,但后文 into the golden potato 应改为 out of the golden potato(因为士兵是从里面爬出来)。
      4. 逻辑细节问题

        • “climb out into the golden potato” 表达反了,应是 climb out of the golden potato
        • “without any fight” 可以,但更习惯说 without a fight

      二、评分(满分 15 分)

      • 内容与创意:4/5(故事完整,有转折)
      • 语法与用词:2/5(多处基础错误)
      • 连贯与结构:3/5(顺序清楚,但连接生硬)
      • 总分9/15(属于“有想法但表达需大幅改进”的水平)

      三、修改后版本(保留原意,修正错误)

      The LZH and the Potato War
      In 2025 BCE, the Potato Kingdom fought a ten-year war against the LZH Kingdom.
      One day, the Potato soldiers sailed away, pretending to flee. The LZH soldiers found a large golden potato left behind. The king of LZH ordered his soldiers to pull it into the city.
      The LZH army celebrated their victory—singing, dancing, and making jokes about the foolish Potato Kingdom.
      By midnight, the LZH soldiers had gone to bed. Then the Potato soldiers, who were hiding inside the golden potato, climbed out, opened the main gate of LZH, and let their army in.
      In the end, the Potato won the war with a clever trick—without a single battle.


      四、学习建议

      1. 时态统一:写过去故事,一般全部用一般过去时。
      2. 动词搭配:注意 pretend to dogo to bed 等固定搭配。
      3. 介词检查climb out of 而不是 climb out into
      4. 细节逻辑:想清楚“土豆藏士兵”如何合理(原文已有创意,只需表达清楚)。

      希望这些建议对你有帮助!如果愿意,我可以帮你用这个主题写一个更生动的版本。

  • @ 2025-12-1 13:24:48

    上述

    LZH滥用职权,中饱私囊,随意刷分,仅仅为了一己私利!

    • @ 2025-12-1 13:26:14

      必须制裁

    • @ 2025-12-1 13:27:16

      \w\i\s\d\o\m\w\i\s\d\o\m

      \智\慧\智\慧

    • @ 2025-12-1 13:29:06

      \f\i\g\h\t\Huge{\f\i\g\h\t}

      \战\争\Huge{\战\争}

    • @ 2025-12-1 13:29:34

      \beat\Mod\huge{\beat\Mod}

      \打\Mod\huge{\color{cc0000}\打败\Mod}

    • @ 2025-12-1 13:30:54

      @ 太血腥了

    • @ 2025-12-1 13:31:18

      \Mod\pretends\failing\Large{\Mod\pretends\failing}

      \Mod\is\hiding\under\the\ground\Large{\Mod\is\hiding\under\the\ground}

      \Mod\succeeded\in\his\trick\Large{\Mod\succeeded\text{\in}\his\trick}

      \Mod\is\n’t\a\potato\Large{\text{\color{cc0000}\Mod\is\n't\a\potato}}

      \Mod\located\himself\in\the\farm\Large{\Mod\located\himself\text{\in}\the\farm}

      \Mod\likes\playing\fish6\Large{\color{cc0000}\Mod\likes\playing\fish6}

  • @ 2025-11-27 19:40:19

    That is OKOK.

    • @ 2025-12-1 13:33:45

      何意味

    • @ 2025-12-1 13:40:28

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      /That/is/OK.\Huge{ \color{2d8cf0} \text{/That/is/OK.} } \That\is\UnOK.\Huge{ \That\is\UnOK\color{cc0000}. }
  • @ 2025-11-27 13:19:44

    成都市委市政府表示坚决拥护党中央决定,将全面贯彻中央要求,确保政令畅通、令行禁止。具体措施包括:

    召开专题会议传达学习中央精神 结合本地实际制定落实方案 强化政治纪律监督 (注:根据公开报道的典型表态模式整理,具体内容需以官方发布为准)

    • @ 2025-11-26 12:56:17

      上诉!

      LZH随意更改我讨论!

    • @ 2025-11-25 13:47:17

      上诉

      @ is playing 扫雷

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